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Post by Ariel on Fri Mar 14, 2014 11:56 pm

Name: Ariel Starr

Age: 14

Divine Ancestry: Flora

Mortal Family:
Christian Starr(Dad,43)
Lolita Starr(Stepmom,37)
Blossom Starr(stepsister,7)

Years in Camp: 3

Rank: Legionare

History: 15 years ago, Christian Starr, a businessman, met the godess Flora on the bus. They started to talk, and soon got together. But after six months of dating, Flora disappeared, only to return nine months later with a baby in her arms. During that time, Christian had waited,waited, waited and finally given up. When Flora approached him again, Christian was with another woman, but took in Ariel anyway. Lolita immediately becamea mother figure to the girl, being very supportive and even naming her Ariel, after her own sister. Two months later, Christian and Lolita married, and began to live together.
Ariel had a very normal, happy life. Early in her life, she would often take care of the little garden in their house with Lolita, and spent a lot of time with Lolita’s cat. She took a special love to nature, and often spent her time outdoors. Due to this, she had many friends and even spent a bit of time as a Girl Scout. She also engaged in many after school activities, such as arts-and -crafts, and taekwondo. By the time Ariel became 7, Lolita had become pregnant. She gave birth to  a beautiful baby girl, who Christian named Blossom. Fearing that Ariel would take all of Christian’s attention, Lolita impulsively sent the girl away to boarding school. Hurt and surprised by Lolita’s actions, Ariel escaped the school and wandered around before approaching the Wolf House by accident. Lupa challanged her to a fight as soon as the girl got there. It was long and tiring, but effective, Ariel's impulsives wakening, and her using a little of her taekwondo and the knowledge she knew from her plants. Lupa taught the youngster information, before letting her loose again. Ariel wandered around often, getting hurt a couple of times, and also gathering two letters of recommendation from veterans, who she accidentally came across. By the time she’d gotten to the camp, Ariel was astonished to discover she had spent two years wandering around.

Physical Appearance: Ariel has long, straight brown hair that goes well over her shoulders. Her eyes, a piercing grey, are big and startling, with or without the dark eyeliner. She’s actually quite small, about 5’1”, and quite agile for her age. She likes to wear black clothing and jeans, along with a snapback or baseball cap. Usually, her face is in a scowl or a smirk, but she also smiles often.

Personality: Ariel has a lot of hate built up, unspent on the true person she’s so mad at. That means that usually she’s a teensy bit vengeful and bloodthirsty, but that doesn’t block her intelligence or friendliness. When in danger, she acts accordingly, and solves her way out in a way that might just make even Minerva proud. If you become good friends, she will do anything to help you. It also means that she has quite a sick sense of attachment, and if you ever leave her….It might be best to be on your guard. She’s very tentative about opening up her doors to welcome newcomers, because of the times she spent wandering alone, where she was often betrayed and hurt by many people. Sometimes she has mood swings, where she might just sit on a log and stare ahead, maybe shed a tear or two if no one’s around.

Fatal Flaw: Ariel is very viable to close up on you, because once she senses distrust, she’ll cut off all ropes of whatever relationship she had with the other person. She’s greatly hurt in many ways, but never really talks about it. It really isn't good for gathering allies, and already she has enough bullies than friends, for whatever reason, height, smirking, personality....etc etc. It rarely helps her in real danger, or things like the war games, where she almost always ends up in the claws of an eagle, bleeding rather heavily.

Talents: Ariel is very talented at hiding her feelings. She is used to blending into the crowd, listening to everything that’s going around but never saying a word. It makes her a useful spy. Also, she’s quite good with gardening, although those skills have never really been called upon for long. She is also mildly good at taekwondo.

Weapons: Bow and arrows

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Re: Ariel Starr

Post by Axel The Bunny on Sat Mar 15, 2014 3:53 am

It looks good to me, Approved
lol not to mention you beat both Ceru and Jake to finishing apps

you'll be joining Cohort 2
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Re: Ariel Starr

Post by Cerulaen on Sat Mar 15, 2014 7:24 pm

Shut up Ax, I'm busier than you...

In any case, everyone looks good, I just have two things:
1) Why did Luna teach her thingd and then "send her back into the world"? Luna's supposed to have them fight her before they join the Legion to prove themself to Rome. Is she tested the first time she meets her, or does Ariel get tested when she comes back two years later?
2) I don't think you can have two fatal flaws, so you might have to pick one and either have the other one stem off of the one, or put one of them in justbyour personality. I'd like to get Jake's opinion on it, though.
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Post by Axel The Bunny on Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:15 pm

actually Luna tests them then gives them some training, i rechecked the book to figure that out ceru

and also hey not my fault you got stuffs to do Razz
But yea i forgot i had to ask about the fatal flaw thing but yea i think it has to be one fatal flaw
i should probably read it instead of skimming xP
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Re: Ariel Starr

Post by Cerulaen on Sat Mar 15, 2014 9:31 pm

Well either way, the app said nothing about the testing. Since noobs are going to be RPing the actual test, I think people should have to at least mention it in their background, maybe say how they won of it was something significant or spectacular.

And since Ax agrees as well, yeah, definitely make it one FF.

And yes, Ax. This is why you (and Jake) have me.
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Re: Ariel Starr

Post by Ariel on Sat Mar 15, 2014 10:29 pm

She gets tested the first time she meets her, and I really didn't pay attention about that process in the Lost Hero.....I hated that book xP

I'll fix it up lol
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Re: Ariel Starr

Post by Ariel on Mon Mar 17, 2014 3:37 am

So...I fixed it....am I accepted?
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Re: Ariel Starr

Post by Cerulaen on Mon Mar 17, 2014 4:18 am

Okay, looks good. Approved! Now Jake has someone to RP with. xP

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